Tuesday, October 30, 2007
Essay Discussion Notes
So we discussed who was going to be each party before we chose the slips of paper and we ended up getting our chosen characters, it was good. Since then we have concluded that I, Ian, shall hold the character of the royal governor on the loyalists side. Then we discussed with Craig the possibility of characters that might seem to be loyalists on the surface but in fact were true patriots and supported the patriot cause. Possibilities include me being the royal loyalist governor while Carolyn plays the part of a slave holding plantation owner who acts like a loyalist but is actually a patriot at heart. Ian as Governor Wheatley, and Carolyn as Flanders Sodderson.
Our choice for the form of this project is a debate, with an emphasis on real-world interaction.
Ian: mariners98198@yahoo.com
Carolyn: carolyn_shaw@hotmail.com
Friday, October 26, 2007
Midterm Practice
Thomas Hobb’s, an 18th century philosopher, is quoted as saying that liberty and necessity are intertwined. He then says that the same liberty and fear are also connected in a simplistic yet sophisticated manner. He explanation of liberty and necessity is slightly flawed though it has its factual roots. He states that because every act of man completed in full liberty springs from a cause for a necessity, liberty and necessity are related. By the definition of the minority a need is anything that they could ever demand, however the true definition stems from a physical requirement for living, and every cause of man is not based on this requirement. Hobbs’ statement that fear and liberty are consistent is however based in fact. For the fact that men do everything they do out of fear of weakness, fear and liberty are consistent however every free act of man does not stem from necessity.
In the heart of a man are many needs and many desires. A physical need is one required for living. A need is nothing more and nothing less. To say need causes every action committed by men in full liberty is a gross exaggeration. Every day men invent new causes to fight for that which fulfills their desire to be thought of as important and powerful. These causes are certainly brought to pass into society by the liberty every man has to order his life the way he so chooses. These causes however are not all based on necessity. A great example is that of American’s richest innovated, Bill Gates. The cause of this man is to have a computer in every single household in America. This is a great and noble cause but it is not based at all in necessity. The necessity of this man is no more than a fanciful desire to complete himself, however it has no affect on whether or not he lives or dies.
Hobbs’ statement that liberty and necessity are consistent stems from the belief that a need is not only that which we must have to survive, but it is anything we ‘must have’. This humanistic hyperbole is just that, an overstatement of the truth and attempt to force their desires into existence. Not every desire of men is based off of a need, and therefore not every action stemming from man’s desire is based off necessity.
Hobbs’ does strike a spot of truth however when he describes how fear and liberty are consistent. Hobbs says this in response to the human condition of being surrounded by those who constantly pick and prod at every flaw and mistake they make. To compensate for this men purposefully mold their actions to fit the law and code of society. In affect every action of man is committed for fear of what society will think or do if what they say and do does not fit the standard. As Hobbs says that every action of men done in full liberty in the common wealth stems from the fear of the law, he is describing this process. One might also relate this to the law and the criminal who decides not to steal his neighbors cow because the law states he must be punished severely for doing so.
Another example of the relationship between fear and liberty comes from the governmental system. Men everyday in the government system of America have the full liberty to make decisions and statements according to the wants and desires of the American people. This liberty, however, is guided by the fear of America’s acceptance of these decisions and statements. In this way liberty and fear are intertwined.
Thomas Hobbs’ description of the relatedness of fear and liberty is based in fact and can be shown in today’s society. However his definition of necessity stems from mans belief that desire equals necessity and this is untrue.
Tuesday, October 23, 2007
Essay Reflection
About my writing process I learned that there is no really form I need to follow except maybe the form of writing my thoughts an ideas down before hand. Whatever form that might hold doesn't matter too much either. At first I was afraid that by writing my intro last, something I had never done before, I would be unable to shape my paper with my thesis statement. However I found out that I was able to write my body paragraphs and then shape my thesis statement around what I wrote. I obviously had to put a little more effort into staying focused and so I wrote one sentence to guide my writing which stated that class was the only reason the rebellion started. Obviously thats no where near a thesis statement but I needed a focused direction. And my writing philosophy, I suppose I really don't actually have a certain form I do it in, just whatever feels right at the time. However I do think that in terms of educational argumentative writing I first state the false actions or believe or what it may be and then state what I think. Then again that could just be because thats what we have learned in class with the they say I say articles. I am pretty unsure. I do know that I wrote my essay in a they say I say format when I usually state my believe, what I say and then relate it to what someone else falsely says, or at least what I see as them falsely saying.
So far I do not see the difference between college and high school writing except maybe the teacher actually speaks with each student and the due dates are sooner. But that is not always an absolute either so I honestly have yet to see a difference. But maybe that will change once I see my grade.
Friday, October 19, 2007
Mary AOD
Wednesday, October 17, 2007
Final Draft-Bacon's Rebellion Essay
Whether it is the richest versus the poorest or survival of the fittest; importance and power has always been based off physical possessions and prowess. The 18th century was no exception. Poor colonists of the time had little control over their own lives in government while the rich, plantation owning members of local government constructed the parameters of daily life in the Chesapeake Bay Colony. These parameters were set up according to the plantation owners needs. They did not take one moment to consider the needs of their fellow, poorer colonists. A few poor colonists felt that at least one of their needs was too great to be ignored, the need for land. The problem with this land is that it belonged to fierce, warring Indians which the wealthy government officials had already made pacts with promising to not touch it. This was a problem since these pacts were made without the poor farming colonists consent. The poor farmers in Chesapeake Bay were less able to get land due to the power and privilege of the upper classed government elite.
This need for land originated as the indentured servants of
The lack of sympathy for the need of poor farmers for land continued to be the prevailing issue as wealthy land owners controlled colonial government. This fact is expressed by a poor farmer named William Tyler, “Nether the governor nor counsel could or would doe any poore men right, but that they would shew favor to great men and wronge the poore.”(Roark 88) Wealthy land owning government officials had made several treaties with Indians to not take their land to prevent war and fighting between the natives and the colonists. This action taken to help the colonial town was actually solely helping the wealthy land owners who made it, and not the lower classed former servants who it affected the most. The evil was not in the making of the treaty itself, but making it without the consent of the majority of the colonists was. Another example of the apathetic view taken by the government of the poor's needs would be when the Indians attacked a local farmer's land and
Bacon himself had his own aggravations to bring against
Another ill-made decision by the wealthy government officials was the decree by Governor William Berkeley that prevented many colonists from trading with local Indian tribes. The purpose of this decree was so colonists would not trade arms with Indians so as to encourage peace. Lower class colonists however accused
What was unique about this rebellion was the white and black comradeship. Poor black and white farmers alike fought the upper classed colonists to obtain the land they wanted making no distinguishment between white and black skin. When wealthy plantation owners came to this realization, they realized they needed to make common ground with the white lower classed farmers so that their authority would never again be challenged in such a way. Slavery was the answer. After the rebellion slavery began to take hold in the colony and white men, whether poor or not, slowly became equal in superiority over black skinned farmers.
In the end twenty three dissenters were hanged for their part in the rebellion and King Charles II retired
Today people with more power constantly out rule those with less power and set up parameters and guidelines often according to their own desires. At the church that hosts the youth group I attend there is a youth room upstairs where we met when I first started attending the youth group. I had the most fun there that I had ever had at any church and I later became a Christian, largely in part because in that youth room we were able to have so much fun. That was the first time that I ever considered that worshiping God could be fun. Later the church decided that they didn’t want the youth meeting up in the room because they were worried about things getting stolen or broken. What they didn’t realize was that kid’s lives, like my own, were changed in that room. The worse part was that us kids, the reason the youth group even exists, had no say in the matter. They were worried solely about their own property and needs and payed no attention to the needs of those they hosted in their church building.
The class and position of a member of a society was seen in Bacon's Rebellion to also determine their consequent influence on the community. In Bacon’s rebellion, the case of class influenced whether or not the unwealthy colonists would get the land they needed from the sometimes vicious Indians. The authority they needed to sway the governmental powers in the colony to war against the Indians was not in their hands though they were the majority. Maybe the poor farmers were corrupt in wanting land that belonged to someone else, but the government was also corrupt for catering to their own personal interests above those of the colony at large. Those that have gained an importance will sway the laws, whether they be rich or poor. The rebels of Bacon’s rebellion also proved this fact as they made themselves important so that the governing elite could no longer ignore them. They fought long and hard to make their voices heard in a government run by the upper class.
Tuesday, October 16, 2007
Essay Rough Draft
The richest, the poorest, the strongest and the weakest; survival of the fittest. Mankind has always based importance and power off of physical possessions and prowess. The 18th century was no exception. Poor colonists of the time had little control over their own lives in government while the rich, plantation owning members of local government constructed each parameter of daily life in the colony. These parameters were set up according to the plantation owners own needs. They did not taking one moment to consider the needs of their fellow, poorer colonists. A few poor colonists felt that their needs were too great to be ignored, especially their need for land. However because this land colonists wanted belonged to fierce, warring the wealthy government officials made pacts with local Indians promising to not touch it. With more colonist’s arriving in the colony every year, action to take more land was inevitable. And if the government didn’t take it, the colonists would.
Three quarters of the way through the 17th century indentured servants began fulfilling their years of service and land for them to dwell was much needed. This along with storms, wars and economic problems across the ocean in
Bacon realized that because of the colonists’ lower place in society that they had very little sway on what the government of
Another ill-made decision by the wealthy government officials was the decree by Governor William Berkeley that prevented many colonists from trading with local Indian tribes. The purpose of this decree was so colonists would not trade arms with Indians so as to encourage peace. Lower class colonists however accused
Bacon, seeing this issue was at the heart of many of the colonist’s complaints, lead the colonists in taking their passions and bringing them into fulfillment. The first attack he made was on the Pamunkey tribe, forcing them out of their nearby residence. After this
Upon receiving information about all of Bacon’s exploits
As soon as Bacon had apologized to
What was unique about this rebellion for its time was the white and black comradeship. Poor colonists made no distinguishment between white and black skin and they worked equally with each other to attain their goals. When wealthy plantation owners came to this realization, they saw the need to have some common ground with the white colonists, and slavery was the answer. After the rebellion slavery began to take hold, and white men; whether poor or not, began to become equal in superiority.
In the end twenty three dissenters were hanged for their part in the rebellion and King Charles II retired
Today people of more importance constantly out rule those of lower influence and set up parameters and guidelines often according to their own needs. At the church that hosts the youth group I go to there is this youth room that we met in when I first started attending the youth group. I had the most fun there that I had ever had at any church and I later became a Christian, largely in part because in that youth room we were able to have so much fun and that was the first time that I ever considered that worshipping God could be fun. Later the church decided that they didn’t want the youth meeting up in the room because they were worried about things getting stolen or broken. What they didn’t realize was that kid’s lives, like my own, were changed in that room, and isn’t that what church is all about? They were worried solely about their own property and needs and not about the needs of those they hosted in their church building.
The question of your class and position in society has throughout the centuries also determined your consequent influence on your community. In Bacon’s rebellion, the case of class influenced whether or not the not so wealthy colonists would get the land they need from the sometimes vicious Indians. The authority they needed to sway the government powers in the colony to war against the Indians was not in their hands though they were the majority. Maybe the colonist’s were corrupt in wanting land that belonged to someone else, but the government was also corrupt for catering to their own personal interests above those of the colony at large. Those that have gained an importance will sway the laws, whether the be rich or poor. The rebels of Bacon’s rebellion showed that anyone could take control if they really wanted to. They also showed that control didn’t always make things work out the way the leaders wanted them to.
Sunday, October 14, 2007
AOD-Mary
Wednesday, October 10, 2007
AOD Life Principles
Monday, October 8, 2007
Rebellion de Bacon
Thursday, October 4, 2007
The Tobacco Delusion
Wednesday, October 3, 2007
ARG!
Tuesday, October 2, 2007
Serving Others
Monday, October 1, 2007
Spanish Conquests Summary
I agree wholeheartedly with friar Anton when he condemns and points out the wrong actions of the spanish against the natives pointing out their obligation to God their Lord and King to love their neighbors as themselves. The kings response to this however is a disgraceful misuse of Biblical truth as he twists the words of Jesus which he says to Peter calling him the rock of which he would build his truth and say instead that Jesus was appointing Peter and ruler of the whole universe. All this to say that any and all successors of Peter's place as pope have authority to give whoever they wish any and all power over anybody and everybody. Jesus is the Lord and Ruler over the world and he commands us in the Bible to love eachother equally. Bartolome's account of the spanish conquest also slightly exaggerates the totality of their brutality. He says that after they destroyed upwords of 12 million natives only 300 survived, he could not have fully known these numbers. However his statement about the natives not being able to understand the spanish document read to them in spanish and therefore died without understanding the catholic faith is very understandable. He also said that all the spanish wanted was gold. This was obvious in the way they ignored the obvious doctrines of their faith as they roasted the natives above campfires. The way the spanish even call themselves christians is detestable and insults every christian who has ever lived.
